Here are my Collage and text concepts with grids:
- Here you can see I have not a lot of text and the line splitting across the page is not working.
- The collage is too big, and there is no focus point what so ever
- The font size might be too big in the heading
- There is too much text under the heading
- The Symbols on the bottom are too detailed. (each picnic table had a icon relating to its place)
- The marine life collage isn't showing enough 'layers'
- Collages are too big
- The colour drop behind the text is basic and boring
Here is the next step I took after my critique with developing my collages and playing around with text concepts.
- The symbols are too spread apart
- Not enough text still
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